Overall tenure is an ineffective way to push the educational system forward. Although there are many beneficial advantages to tenure, the disadvantages out weights the advantages. Ultimately many solely see the security of jobs rather than the moving forward of education and the impact it would have on the world. If students aren’t giving modernized views on education it would only be a set back to society.
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Hi Fiord, I’m not sure you used the formula discussed– where is your perhaps sentence? Also– reconsider this sentence: Although there are many beneficial advantages to tenure, the disadvantages out weights the advantages
It’s too vague and your phrasing is redundant– advantages are automatically beneficial.