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according to the articles Veterans Face “Greater Risks Amid Opioid Crisis”(2016) and “A Growing Number Of Veterans Struggles To Quit Powerful Painkillers”(2014)  it is argued that there is an opioid epidemic and a lot of the victims are veterans. These articles are saying that veterans have a high chance for addiction to opioids because they are more vulnerable to pain and injury and they usually have to be treat fast so they can get back to the fight. I believe this to be true specially during times of war, doctors want their soldier to quickly go back to the fight and they don’t have time to give full treatments that takes a long time to heal or fix the problem so they instead just give a painkiller and back to the field the soldier go.

The number of veterans that have opioid addiction keep to grow over the years as the war  continued. In the articles by Quil Lawrence(2014) points out “During wartime, doctors and medics need to trear troops for pain, and often use prescription opiates to solve that problem.”

Ps: I put that quote but I haven’t really worked around it.

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according to the articles Veterans Face “Greater Risks Amid Opioid Crisis”(2016) and “A Growing Number Of Veterans Struggles To Quit Powerful Painkillers”(2014) it is argued that there is an opioid epidemic and a lot of the victims are veterans. OR YOU CAN GET RID OF THE ACCORDING TO AND JUST HAVE THE NAME OF THE ARTICLES ALONGSIDE THE AUTHORS AND YEARS ARGUED THAT…

These articles are saying that veterans have a high chance for addiction to opioids because they are more vulnerable to pain and injury and they usually have to be treat fast so they can get back to the fight. COULD THIS BE YOUR THEY SAY IF YOU SIMPLY ADDED A THEY– AUTHOR (YEAR) AND AUTHOR (YEAR) ARGUE THAT VETERANS HAVE A HIGH CHANCE…

I believe this to be true specially during times of war, doctors want their soldier to quickly go back to the fight and they don’t have time to give full treatments that takes a long time to heal or fix the problem so they instead just give a painkiller and back to the field the soldier go. COULD YOU GET RID OF THE FIRST PERSON HERE?

YOUR THESIS STATEMENT IS STRONG– I’M NOT SURE HOW THE BELOW PASSAGE FITS IN TO ALL OF THIS….

The number of veterans that have opioid addiction keep to grow over the years as the war continued. In the articles by Quil Lawrence(2014) points out “During wartime, doctors and medics need to trear troops for pain, and often use prescription opiates to solve that problem.”

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