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Addictive behavior is caused by genetic or environmental influences WHO SAYS THIS? IS THIS WHAT YOU BELIEVE? OR IS THIS WHAT THE THEY ARE SAYING?
. the article “can you get over an addiction” by Maia Szalavitz supports this statement states that “deep, emotional learning completely alters the way you determine what matters most, which is why you remember your high school crush better than high school math” I’M NOT SURE WHAT THIS QUOTE HAS TO DO WITH YOUR THESIS STATEMENT? IT’S BEST TO PARAPHRASE WHAT THEY ARE SAYING, ESPECIALLY IN AN INTRO. this is true because

I HOPE TO SEE YOU IN CLASS. FEEL FREE TO KEEP REVISING THIS THESIS STATEMENT TO ENSURE YOU UNDERSTAND WHAT IS EXPECTED OF YOU FOR YOUR ACTUAL LITERATURE REVIEW ASSIGNMENT. DW