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Drug thesis statement

According to the articles by Sara Childress(2016), Maia Szalavitz(2016), and M. Scott Brauer(2017), the authors state that drugs in America are a huge negative impact towards people who are living in the country. The problem with drug addiction has not only lead up to physically affecting somebody negatively, but psychologically as well.

 

Drug addiction can affect the brain in undesired ways. People get addicted to drugs because it can help them calm their brains, that is why Americans take heroin, or smoke marijuana.Szalavitz(2016), talks about how addiction to drugs is like a disease. But it is not like brain cancer or Alzheimer. It affects your brain differently then if you were to have a mental disorder.Being addicted to drugs can shift your mindset differently. It would make people just think about drugs as their priority and do things they might not want to do.

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According to the articles by Sara Childress(2016), Maia Szalavitz(2016), and M. Scott Brauer(2017), the authors state that drugs in America are a huge negative impact towards people who are living in the country. The problem with drug addiction has not only lead up to physically affecting somebody negatively, but psychologically as well. GREAT, SO ARE YOU SAYING THEY BELIEVE DRUGS IMPACT PEOPLE NEGATIVELY, AND YOU AGREE, BUT WANT TO PUSH IT FURTHER AND SAY IT ALSO IMPACTS PEOPLE PSYCHOLOGICALLY?

Drug addiction can affect the brain in undesired ways. People get addicted to drugs because it can help them calm their brains, that is why Americans take heroin, or smoke marijuana.Szalavitz(2016), talks about how addiction to drugs is like a disease. But it is not like brain cancer or Alzheimer. It affects your brain differently then if you were to have a mental disorder.Being addicted to drugs can shift your mindset differently. It would make people just think about drugs as their priority and do things they might not want to do. HMM…I THINK THIS IS RUSHED– I’M NOT SURE YOU’RE CLEAR ON WHAT YOUR FOCUS IS HERE. BE CAREFUL WHEN WRITING, YOU HAVE A TENDENCY TO WRITE LISTS, OR RANDOM THOUGHTS, WHICH IS FINE, BUT YOU WANT TO GO BACK AND PROOFREAD TO MAKE SURE THERE’S A UNIFYING IDEA CONNECTING THESE LISTS, IF THERE’S NOT, YOU WANT TO DELETE AND RESTATE.

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